Friday, November 21, 2008

Cried 'til it Hurt - 2008 Nov 15

Cried 'til it hurt
la la la
Raz pic pride
shanna men na
Music press pull
strum didy dumb
Papa's voice punched
bam didy bam

Nina's radio rad
wa wa wa
Michael's counts
click click click
Katie's doll
tick tick tick
Melinda's heart
sick sick sick

Razzing til it hurt
Pickin' part pride
Music turn the knob
Press in the corner
Pull in 'way at seams
Cry baby cry
cry cry cry.

2 comments:

DixieLynn said...

This is like a song, a soft rap, rhythm of the heart. So beautiful.

JohnD said...

There's something very special about this post. When you read it, it was especially magical. I love the way your writing often hints at things, allowing the reader/listener to find her/his own meaning.